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chaplin90

  • Scripts Re: Full script for a film I did not complete

    ok i'll do that right away!

    Aug 9, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fallout short poem

    Yes I agree with what you've said and I think that some of the errors I have made are just spelling, not my strong point, but thank you for reading ...

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: I am not my Country.

    Very nice, it really dose have a great meaning behind it I really like it, it is so simplistic but yet very hard hitting and important. I would love to ...

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fallout short poem

    Yeah thanks I agree with you I think when the time comes to revise it I'll definitely use your suggestions, thanks for reading!

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Saving Me

    This poem is very nice and meaningful. I love your descriptions and the I love how you immediately set the location so we all get a good idea of the ...

    Jul 31, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Up!

    Very nice I really like those lyrics and I would love to hear it as a song. Hard to fault it as it seems very meaningful and highly interesting, very ...

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fallout short poem

    This is more or less my first poem, the idea just suddenly came to me and I had to write it down. Now with this begin my first poem I ...

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Ill

    Hi, I've got to tell you I really enjoyed reading this story, your descriptions of post apocalyptic earth are both chilling and realistic, in fact the whole story was very ...

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: ww1 Short Story

    This is a short story a have written based in a ww1 inside a small Sopwith pup biplane. Any feedback would be appreciated. enjoy! Falling in Flames Short story by ...

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Scripts Re: Full script for a film I did not complete

    This is a script for my "Summer film" called "Tailwind". It is based in ww2 and mainly takes place aboard a junkers trimotor passenger plane. I'll won't exsplain the story ...

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Aliens!

    That was a fun little story, not to sound patronising of course. It had a good narrative and some nice ideas. Like some of the others I feel that maybe ...

    Jul 30, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: End.

    I really enjoy reading stories such as this one, and it was no exception. I fully enjoyed reading your story, I wasn't sure about the opening line "I know what ...

    Jul 30, 2008


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