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Re: Don't butter my toast
I'm not a good nittpicker, so I'm not going to deal with that. But, yeah, intreaging way to think of being original. Original way to think of being original. :) ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Voids.
Whoa, deep. I love it when there's no names, just a story. Backward love story. Love it. Okay... I think the Pluto thing was really original. Oh, one thing... is ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: In the Pursuit of Happiness
I thought this title was already taken. Anyway, I think the language could be cleaned up a bit. Was every cuss word nessasary? Other than that and the title, I ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow
Please reconsider your word choices. Or use ****
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Echo
Is there supposed to be a solid deeper meaning? Because I can see a few ways someone would take it. I like it, but I think you could continue that ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: assorted poems
Mist- Is this supposed to mean a hope is also a fear at the same time? Like, you want it to happen, but, at the same time, you don't want ...
Oct 10, 2010