cee17

Hi there! I really enjoyed this poem. I particularly like the first three stanzas. The imagery is strong but simple, not overdone or forced. I like that throughout the poem ...

I really loved this. I think the tone is just right, and the emotion that the speaker is feeling comes across nicely. a couple nit pickey things: Even so, seeing ...

Personally, I loved the prose. The first two paragraphs were my favorite: they are vivid, thoughtful, and carefully put together. I do think you could try to simplify them a ...