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Of Course “Of course, Billy Joel was playing when Jane was born.” A disembodied voice is saying. The voice rings above the many confined, murmuring voices vying for resonance in ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this poem. I particularly like the first three stanzas. The imagery is strong but simple, not overdone or forced. I like that throughout the poem ...

Kind of an experiment... let me know what you think! “I had a dream last night that I died.” She said as she sat down beside him. Her voice was ...

I really loved this. I think the tone is just right, and the emotion that the speaker is feeling comes across nicely. a couple nit pickey things: Even so, seeing ...

Personally, I loved the prose. The first two paragraphs were my favorite: they are vivid, thoughtful, and carefully put together. I do think you could try to simplify them a ...

Hi everyone, I found this site a while ago, and had been thinking about joining. I just finished a story, so I decided to go for it... I need some ...