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Ok. All I can say is "WOW". Really, extremely interesting... weather you have an amazing talent to create such a vivid picture of your characters emotions or you just worked ...

Hi Kakali, first off thanks for PM'ing me! I was totally excited to read your first chapter! Ok, so lets get down to it. and a young lad In thinking ...

As a reader it was a bit hard for me to really connect with anything or anyone. Obviously you are creating a totally different reality than "us humans" are used ...

A major improvement from the first version! One thing I noticed as a reader was near the end; Claire wondered what they were like. How many of them lived there? ...