cbwriterchick

The Girl He watches her sleep. The moonlight, shining on her perfect skin. The spread of dark hair over the pillow case. The shadows her eyelashes cast over her face. ...

That was the most amazingly beautiful, if something that dark can be considered beautiful, I loved it. I am a young writer (13 years) and reading that inspires me to ...

I like how you did the emotions with 'breaking up' with your friend, i think it is something that most teenage girls can relate to. Also, I loved the vocabulary ...