cbwriterchick

This was great. I can feel your emotion as you write it. That could be because I'm in your possition.... Anyways! I loved this poem because it projects feelings that ...

My friend was on my laptop while I was getting something and they posted this, sorry for that, I don't want people reading it. Here's something else. “Thanks” The word ...

This was really good! My favorite part, because I think most people (if not, just me because I'm crazy) can relate to it is the "Did you hear my give ...

That was really helpful, thanks! cbwriterchick

OK, so this was written right after my friend told me they never wanted to talk to me again, and I still dont know why. THIS HAS BEEN EDITED. Still ...

I loved that. The whole aspect of filling a notebook is something I can really relate to, so i really liked it. keep writing!

That was really good, but I still have a few questions. as the author, are you talking to your friend telling them to kiss him, or to yourself convincing yourself ...

OK, this was good, but I do have a few questions. first of all, how did your friend know the person before you. second, why did the person come up ...

ok, this was amazing. I love the first line, about the glow of the cigarretes. the part about him playing his guitar without looking at the strings was perfect, and ...

I really liked this. The repitition can be kind of.... repetitive. saying 'i love you' over and over got a little boring (im sorry to say), but i can see ...

I really loved this. my favorite part was the "With a deep breath I do the hardest thing I've ever had to do Without a backward glance I walk away ...

Dads Dads are perfect for some things. Things like tucking you in at night, Pulling the covers up under your chin. Or holding you in a towel When you climb ...

If Only I Could Sleep I'm so tired. Bags are under my eyes, and my body sags with exhaustion. But it seems as though no one will let me sleep. ...

Ok, coming from the point of view of a thirteen year old girl, wow. I can completely see where you're coming from. I have had a few boy problems myself ...

I don’t think anyone can quite understand the way I feel when he enters the room. I don’t think anyone knows what it feels like to be the mad for ...