catharsis

Thanks, WM! Your comments certainly do help. :) Wow, this is better feedback than I've gotten on any of the other sites I've tried! :D

Stretch your hand against the sky: No puedo cubrir el cielo,* you sigh and turn to me, your juice-stained lips as tempting as any ripened fruit a poet has ever ...

Ha... I loved it. Very clever, and indeed very disturbing, as was your intent. Dark and twisted and kind of alluring in a perverse way; this poem, if I had ...

...I love this. Absolutely love it. Don't change a word, please, Fabien. The narrative in poem form is a hard thing to pull off, but this is done beautifully. One ...

I agree that it felt like there was some missing punctuation, and the spacing was odd--are there meant to be two line breaks between S2 and S3? And the five ...

:lol: The surprise twist at the end got me. I liked this, though it felt a little more narrative-y than poetic, if you get what I'm trying to say. Still, ...

The name's Cath, in real life and as a nickname for my penname. Cath Hale. Yep, just like John Hale from The Crucible, one of my favorite--and in my opinion, ...