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Oh boy did that ending get me by surprise! I was genuinely anticipating Jahan and the others to celebrate their freedom but then came that deliciously unexpected twist (no pun ...

Ah! Despite a few occasional grammatical errors here and there, that was quite good! Also, I actually want to find out what happens next in your story so nice job ...

Haha nice! I haven't read something like this in a while so it was quite a pleasant surprise stumbling across it. It reminded me of Between the Lines by Jodi ...

Hey GDrama97, Okay so this is a pretty good story ^_^ but I do think it could do with a little improvement here and there. I think I'd have to ...

Hey Justlittleoleme, so I finally came back and read this (sorry for the super delayed response; I haven't been on YWS for ages) and nice job so far! I won't ...

Wow! This was really good! It sounds a lot like you were quite upset and angry and frustrated and let that all out in the form of this poem. Yes, ...

First off, this is a pretty good story. I really like how you put so much effort into describing it and the plot was also pretty interesting. For a first ...

Great story! I'll just do a quick review since I think that most of what I would've liked to have said was already mentioned in Lauren2010's review. I suppose there ...

Wow! Pretty violent! And also pretty good. :smt001 I agree with Benrobertringrose on his opinion of your story. It was really interesting and kept me captivated the whole time. I ...

Hi! Your story was awesome! :D I completely agree with alfredsymon and munchkin on everything they said. I simply couldn't pull my eyes away from the screen once I started ...

Omg this is REALLY good!!! I admire almost everything about it!!! The beginning is really catchy and the ending is absolutely amazing ! Great job on this magnificent piece! :D ...

Honestly, I really liked this. It was pretty good for something written in eight minutes but I do believe that it could do with a little improvement. I must also ...

Hey! First thing is...great job!! :D This is really good! I absolutely adore your use of description and how you've added detail into this piece. I must also completely agree ...

OMG! This-was- INCREDIBLE !!! I can't believe no one has reviewed it yet!!! It's, by far, the BEST piece I've come across for a while. I can't believe how amazing ...

Omg this is so crazy! In a way, I like that. It's so random and weird and strange and a whole list of other words that won't come to mind ...