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thanx so much Azila!

thanx bigbad! i guess we are now each other's #1 fans! i look forward to reading more MD and i will post more DN soon! thanx again!

ha i like the way youre alll oh no im gonna die and then hey buddy whats up good job i still think you could go into a little more ...

oh and sallow is a word that means kind of caved in and gaunt

thanx! i was so worried it wouldnt keep the readers attention! :lol:

oh and bigbad i will explain the whole unsurprised thing in the next chapter because it turns out that our mc is wondering that too. ;)

you guys left awesome critiques, better than i've ever recieved before and i loved it! thank you so much. i also liked how you looked at the piece with such ...

ok thanx i fixed the spelling thing. i can understand what you mean about the dream thing but it's kind of supposed to be that way. thanx again for the ...

ha ha thanks! :) :D

thanx so much for the critique! i was beginning to think i had scared people away with my weird thoughts. :P thx!

umm one comment... i am now officially your #1 fan! at least for Midnight Darkness. I've read all of them and i am now waiting impatiently for the next chapter.

im going to reveal her past later in the story it makes her more mysterious. im working on getting the next chapter out here, dont worry. thanks for the critiques! ...

ok you know the 21 reviews you cant see? yah those are your postings on here. everytime you add another message onto this chapter, the computer thinks its a review. ...

oh the dialogue is italisized because she is thinking it. you know, like slowly taking the world in. ill work on the stiffness of the dialogue thanks!

come on people! please review!