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Umm... this is my first posting so I'm not too sure what to do. I just decided to post the first page of one of the stories i was writing ...

this is just a poem i had to write for school and decided to post here PLEASE REVIEW i am new here and want to see what it's like thank ...

this is just the beginning of chapter 1 of one of my stories. It is not the whole chapter i repeat, not the whole chapter. just the beginning part. please ...

well Azila critiqued my prologue so i fixed some errors and now the whole chapter is up for grabs. to be honest, I'm very nervous about posting some of my ...

-this piece has been edited by the author according to suggestions made by critiques- This is just some strange thoughts that i wanted to write about for no reason in ...

I used the first paragraph of one of my other stories, so if it seems familiar thats why. Please review, i know its long. *** Chapter 1 All was silent. ...

i have edited this according to the suggestions so far ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- well heres the second chapter, keep in mind it is not near as

here's the third chapter! still long, but read it and tell me what you think! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3 Eventually, night cast its

i wrote it a couple seconds ago and gave it a short revise but it still might be kind of... rough. just thought i'd give it a try. some rhymes ...

well here it is, the fourth chapter. another long one i'm afraid but it should be good. (hopefully) please review! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

well here it is! i have to admit im not so sure how this chapter will be responded to, i think i did ok but not that many exciting things ...

Chapter 6 As they called the first werecat up to the podium to introduce themselves, my mind was racing. In the short moment it took for the speaker to begin, ...

sorry this one took so long. writers block had me crippled --------------------------------- Chapter 7 The crowd was rippling with anticipation, seeming to swell with impatience. All around me, excite

Chapter 8 Oh well I see werecats are full of moral and ethical values! I had my doubts before but oh no, it seems I was wrong! I thought wryly ...

uhh sorry it took so long but here it is! ------------------------- Chapter 9 “Coden, Coden!” Rheeba tapped my shoulder. “Hmmph?” I mumbled, looking up, “What?” “What on earth are you ...

this is my entry for Azila's POV contest. The style is choppy and kinda weird, but if you think of it kinda like poetry... ---------------------------------------- Cold. Cold and wet. Hard ...

I wrote this for 1dering at stars' Fairytale Contest. I've never written anything close to this style, it was hard to keep it simple, see how you like it! ---------------------------------------------

I wrote this for 1dering at stars' Box Contest. It's kinda weird but it was fun to write! --------------------------- The girl opposite me peeked at IT out of the corner ...

I had a sudden urge to write this and I don't know how good it will be. I've never written anything like this so don't kill me please. Critiques welcome! ...

-undergoing major reconstruction, check back later-

-undergoing major reconstruction, check back later-

Okay, so I just finished reading Maximum Ride: The Final Warning in like an hour. I ate it up. Buuuuut... I have to say the whole global warming advertisement was ...

AN: Something short I was playing around with for the On Fire Contest. ------------------------------------- A fine line drawn by a singed string. Life, death; strange that two such different things ...

Reviews wanted, even if you have not read the books ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Prologue- Lightning A violent howled through the clearing, screaming of pain.

Chapter 1- Bitter Uncertainty Beams of sunlight pierced the sparse clouds, highlighting the shimmering pelts of BurnClan cats stretched out below. Mates were sharing tongues and kits were exploring th

Chapter 2- Challenge Sunpaw’s eyes widened as the BurnClan cats approached Red Bluff. The cliff-like rock formation was arranged in a crescent half-circle, facing them. The rocks were dusty red, ...

Chapter 3- Prophecy and Punishment A solitary cloud began drifting towards the moon. As it entered the path of light, darkening the clearing, the cats below began to panic. Like ...

A/N:Not really going anywhere with this, I wrote it as an RP sample and liked it. Enjoy! --------------------------------------------- Blood swathed the small clearing as if the ground itself had been

Chapter 4- Lost The biting stench of mouse bile-soaked moss made Sunpaw’s lip curl with disgust. Her ears were flat against her head as she dropped it near a gray-striped ...

Shrouded Sun Chapter 5- Haze When Sunpaw managed to open her eyes, she was overwhelmed with tiny details. The most unsettling was pain. There was a throbbing, swelling bruise under ...

Just finished Ptolemy's Gate yesterday... Is anyone else in love with this series?? Seriously, I haven't really heard people talk about it but I personally loved the imagination and complexities ...

**Author's Note: My first romance story, so sorry for the stumbling. Also, the romance doesn't come till later.** Chapter 1 Hopscotch was cool, but Casper Wolfe didn’t play. Pigtails were ...

Chapter 2 I’ve never gotten the point of nicknames. If you think about it, a name is your identification. If someone asks who you are, you don’t prattle off your ...

Note: To anyone who is reading this story and has not been reviewing, PLEASE at least post something like 'I liked it', because I'm getting a bit discouraged. Of course, ...

Chapter 4 Woodruff High School runs in a block schedule, which means we have eight classes but only four a day. One day I have Periods 1-4, the next 5-8. ...

Prologue was deleted because it was boring... very boring.Some "Disclaimers"-This story's about Greek gods but does not reflect my personal beliefs-I know the plot and character relationships do not f

Read the prologue first!! Please critique plot and characters, no nitpicks. Also, for clarity's sake, keep in mind that Mount Olympus is a 'seperate dimension' layered over Earth that the ...

SECTION 1: ZEUS AND HERACHAPTER 2 Hera It had been a long time, even in Olympian time, since Zeus had been home. Rhea, his mother, Mother of the Earth, had ...

Had to do this for my creative writing class. The assignment was to make a short story that started with the sentence: The first time someone heard some song by ...