cassie17

Yes, I think that mental pain is lasts for much longer. It's like a wound that doesn't heal... But in Illinois, if you're trying to save a kid from one ...

This kind of fits in this with this topic... Which do you think is more detrimental, is more evil? Physical or mental abuse? --Cassie

So, do you prefer past or present tense? I used to write strictly in past tense. Then, I read a Great and Terrible Beauty by Libba Bray and found that ...

My sister loosely calls people "retarded", etc., and I always tell her not to do so. The term is hurtful and downright wrong. Some people think actual retarded people are ...

Personally, I'm pro-choice. Who is to say what a woman can or can't do with her body? What SHOULD be outlawed is late term abortions. That stuff just sickens me. ...

Sounds like a story about a young kid with a troubled past, looking forward to a bleak future. I would read the blurb. At the very least, I'd pick it ...

I have problems sticking with my stories. I always toss em out, even if I think they have potential. It's a constant argument in my head, to continue or not ...

I liked Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse. I got BD yesterday and despite it's massive bulk (754 pages) I managed it in a little over 18 hours. Let's just say ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I just have a few suggestions: What Heart? You say to me, give me your heart. But why? Why was I placed on this futile ...

I really liked this poem! It seemed so real. I just have a few suggestions: "Everytime when the dawn rises, something dark is always waiting ahead. Somehow, we always surpass ...

I liked this poem because it sounds really natural and free. But, like the person above me, I had a hard time interpreting this poem. It kinda seems like you ...

This is really good. The face is the best part and you used a lot of detail. The nose is very nice (I'm jealous, I simply canNOT draw noses, teehee) ...

These are really nice. I have so much trouble drawing hands and feet, even when I'm looking at my hand so I SHOULD know where all the bends, wrinkles, etc. ...

This was pretty good, in my opinion. I don't mind the capitalization (or lack there-of). I feel that choosing whether or not to capitalize can really kind of "set the ...

This is the first thing I've contributed here and I'm really nervous 'cause everyone here seems so good already!!! So anyway, here is my poem. There is something I cannot ...