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Hi! I really liked it. The rhymes didn't seem forced, and I liked the descriptions. At first, I didn't understand the purpose of the parentheses. What is in the parentheses ...

Wow, I really love this! At first I was skeptical--starting all your sentences with there? But it turned out to be a technique I really enjoyed. I have one comment ...

This was really well written! Like the two above me, making it longer would transform this into a full-fledged essay. However, I'm so amazed what I learned in a few ...

Hi, borntoshop! Okay, overall this piece needs a lot of revision. Your sentences are long, so long, and are desperately in need of some commas, semicolons, and downright full stops. ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! I know the lake photos are pretty out of focus. My camera isn't super amazing and I've been too lazy to load photoshop back on ...

Hi, Rebellionlies! I'm back again...I've taken a special liking to you. I can fix your capitalization-after-speech thing. What the problem is is that you're using a period to end your ...

No, no, Arcaus, I totally understand where you're coming from. However, if you take a look, what Hannah corrects is mostly grammar mistakes. She compliments the idea of the story ...

Arcaus--the point of putting up work to be critiqued is just that--to be critiqued. I completely agree with Hannah. There are minor technical flaws in this piece, and the speech ...

These are really artistic. I love them and wish I could take such beautiful pictures! I love the one of your dog! Does he (she?) have two different colored eyes? ...

This is really nice! But, of course, I have a few teeny little details to point out. The armpit on the left side seems too high. Also on the left ...

I think we can all come to the consensus that the unrealistic appearances portrayed by the media as the "ideal" body pressures both men and women. However, as Thunderdude said, ...

I really enjoyed this poem, though, like everything, it can be improved. There are a few spelling mistakes (the first illustrous, for example, should be illustrious as you have it ...

Which do you prefer and why? For me, I always used to write in past tense until a few years ago--past tense was normal and natural for me. Then, after ...

I don't dislike them. The person below me is posting from a laptop.

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