cassie17

Alright...well, just so you know, you need to do 2 reviews before you post something of your own. Keep a 2:1 ratio, okay? So get out there and start reviewing! ...

Hi! Make sure that you review at least 2 pieces before posting your own. YWS keeps a 2:1 ratio on reviews to postings of your own work. But anyway, on ...

Hi! This was definitely an interesting and unique poem! Onto the review: You know what I want? I want some string cheese! I'm awfully hungry; could you pass me some ...

Hmmm...someone mentioned something about free-verse. I think that would suit this idea amazingly well. To be honest, I didn't even realize there was a rhyming scheme until I read some ...

Wow, great job! I loved it so much. The imagery was perfect, beautiful. I liked the no-punctuation thing until it became inconsistent. Anyway, on to the review: "Do you remember ...

I'm pretty sure the point of this was to actually have all of those spelling and grammar mistakes, right? Because, if so, I'm going to put away the dictionary/grammar handbook ...

I really liked this! It was short and flowing, very easy to read. The central thought was nice, but I had to think about it a while to understand it ...

Hi, Kayyo! The moments are passing. The days are dwindling. I've lost who I'm being. I've lost who I WAS, maybe? I've forgotten who I'm becoming. The lies forever surround ...

Hi, grey ghost! Well, personally, I am sort of a haiku addict. I read them all the time and am constantly creating them, even unconsciously. It's hard to make a ...

someone very outspoken and opinionated who follows life by their own rules. :D cassie17

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I always stare at you, when your not looking. "your" should be "you're" as in in you are Laughing, or talking a little louder when you walk by. talking a ...

This is amazing. You captured the true, raw emotion. Great job. But I wish you hadn't because now I feel completely sad. But if you're that talented...well, it's good you're ...

Ha, this was great! Such a fun read. You, friend, are a genius! Thanks for putting a smile on my face. -Cassie

I’m dancing over the others I must tread lightly and not disturb Their thoughts their thoughts their thoughts They’re thinking and too much thinking To think about me. I must ...