Young Writers Society

Well. Fisrt of all, this was good. A few nitpicks... something I often do myself, but you need to watch how many comma's you put in. Some are un-neccasary. This ...

Luv Luv Luv it! thats all i have to say! -cassidyrose

Ok. I really liked this, but at the same time I found it kind of confusing. I didn't really follow it that well. Other then that, it was a very ...

This was a good poem and even though I am a girl, I can relate! I found nothing wrong wit this, as it was very short and sweet, and there ...

Oh my gosh! this was sooooooo sweet. I absoluley love romantic stories, and this was a good one! Loved it!

The girl had short brown hair, that was cut in a longer bob, and was down. A hidden blue headband that had a huge peacock feather bunch in it held ...

This was good, and I agree. I have a very hard time finding things that rhyme with purple. Keep up the good work! CassidyRose

Star light, star bright. The first star I see tonight. I wish I may, I wish I might, have this wish, I wish tonight. Dear star, Once again I have ...

Awesome!

Just 1 thing to say... SHORT... for a chapter anyway. Other then that, it was really good! CassidyRose

This is a poem about how through out the years we went to school on Valentines day, what we did, how we acted, and what we wished. It is about ...

okay. so this was a good story, like everything you write... just remember. Watch when you use the word "threw", when you use it it should actually be spelled "through". ...

I sit in the seat across from him on the bus, His best friends surrounding him. His hair falls in his face and he oh so casually sweeps it away, ...

Awesome... it is perfect

Hey y'all! First off, you better review this cuz I said so!!! Second, I would like to say that you need to go read chapter 3 of my story, cuz ...