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  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: Here in the Dark

    instead of using it isn't safe to play twice near the end of the poem, try to find another word. It will capture the readers attention more. Besides that It ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Coffee

    Review :D Positives 1.This poem has great description has great imagery 3.You can capture the feeling of the character Negatives The poem could be a little bit longer Overall The ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Same Pain

    thanks for the review :D

    Jul 2, 2014


Edna began to feel like one who awakens gradually out of a dream, a delicious, grotesque, impossible dream, to feel again the realities pressing into her soul.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening