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carolinewashere

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The land of milk and honey

    i thought that the beginning was pretty good, but towards then end your thoughts seemed to be jumping around and you just wrote what ever you could down. I don't ...

    Mar 1, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Amaranth

    wicked sweet vocabulary! i had a little trouble, i had to read lines over again a couple times, not that flow-y a little confused at the end with the damned ...

    Mar 1, 2008


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