carolinewashere

it was good. i liked the repetition but the main parts of each stanza switched around alot. you seemed to be talking about a bunch of different things rather then ...

liked your poem or song? thought it was a little love-y corny though. besides that it was good great job

can you see the sunset from the southside? can you see the sunrise from the east? can you hear me whisper with your ears closed? can you taste the wind ...

i thought that the beginning was pretty good, but towards then end your thoughts seemed to be jumping around and you just wrote what ever you could down. I don't ...

Say "Sienara" to this diorama of my life. I'm tired of being a clay-mation in this old shoe box of a situation. Stop trying to mold my mind its not ...

wicked sweet vocabulary! i had a little trouble, i had to read lines over again a couple times, not that flow-y a little confused at the end with the damned ...

i really liked your song. the only thing i have to say is that the use of barn animals to me seemed a little corny. But if you were going ...

hey everyone. Im new. so im just stoppin' by to say hi.