carolinewashere

Fay watched through the raindrop splattered window. She was looking at her mother as she got into the back of the red jeep that was parked in the driveway. Her ...

at first I did not really know what it was about. Im still not really sure what its about. But thats okay. I really liked the lines And we never ...

at first I did not really know what it was about. Im still not really sure what its about. But thats okay. I really liked the lines And we never ...

I don't drink I cant drive (yet) I love to smile and I, would talk forever. If someone wanted to listen to me. I wont smoke, not ever. Not if ...

wowza thats a great poem. jeez i must say i cant think of anything bad to say. Maybe just at some parts i wasn't sure what was going on but ...

I thinks it is really good. I liked some parts a wicked lot but then sometimes if felt cliche or like you just skipped over a thought and wrote something ...

I saw those pictures of you. You, who I thought were my friends, laughing and having fun. But am I there beside you? Trapped in the house with my boring ...

i really liked the poem. I imagined alot of yellows, bright greens, and bright oranges when i read it. There isn't much bad to say about. i like it alot

I am still your little girl, but I am growing older. I know you don't want me to turn, but if I don't grow I cant learn. If I don't ...

good poem! i like it alot. Some of the things you talk about i really understand, like the simple things mentioned (light bouncing off into your eyes). But since im ...

all i can say is......WOW. your great at writing, and with adjectives. this poem is really good. im jealous of your talent!

good poems. i thought they were both a little cheesy and the rhymes were force. but besides that they were good.

i like it alot. its really good. maybe if you broke it into stanzas it would be better? But i really dont know anyway, i like.

i really like it but i don't know. i don't really understand the poem that well. I didnt get what you were driving at to me it seemed like words. ...

amazing!!! only one thing really bothered me was when you wrote I mean, my apartment was. Clothing was scattered all about my room i like how the narrator is catching ...