carolinewashere

I really like it! I cant think of anything to critique about it. Totally got the nature and love comparison! good job keep writing!

Very nice job. It is a good poem. I agree with DrammaMomma that there are a few too many commas. But writing about writers block, well, it just dose not ...

I thought this poem was really cute. I did not understand why up underlined some lines and put arrows in front of others? But that's okay. Some of the rhymes ...

I like how you made happiness seem like it wasn't so great. Usually happiness is idealized as something perfect and everyone wants this perfect happiness. But you showed happiness as ...

I did not really understand this poem In the first line you say "this last poem is unfortunately the last" when i read it i was thinking, yes you just ...

The orange glow of sixteen cigarettes was all that was visible besides the stars as we sat around in a circle on hard plastic chairs, drinking bud light from aluminum ...

I really like this. I wasn't really concentrating on anything to critique. I could picture this character sitting on a dock with there toes in the water. I thought it ...

I could feel the emotion in the poem so that's great. You always want the reader to feel emotion. In the second stanza in the second line where it says ...

this is interesting start! i cant wait to read more! message me when you have more because i would love to fallow this.

The knot in a broken marriage part is very witty. I did not like how you rhymed extinct and linked but didn't rhyme anything else. I don't know if we ...

this poem lacks, emotion. Its just kind of words. I totally understand the story but i feel like asking "So what?". Maybe its because i have never had appendix pains. ...

Great poem! i like it a lot. I like the part about the pictures turning to sand in the hand. That was really neat. But, I thought this line was ...

The Friendship Bracelet around my wrist. It's cutting off my circulation. The words no and stop mean nothing to you. My words never seem to enter your head because the ...

This poem seems very emotional and its great to be opening up in poetry. My only critique is that in the 3rd stanza it would be better to rhyme alive ...

Happy times are times when you cut school early to get a frosty, then get lost on your way to Wendy's. But you do not care 'cause the radio is ...