carolinewashere

This was an interesting read. I'm glad you let me know you were posting it. I enjoyed reading it! I like thinking about weird things. Water is another thing, besides ...

I was thinking about time the other day. What do you think about time? Have you ever really thought about it before? I guess this is just to get people ...

It was a good poem! the only thing that bothered me was this line: "you never left when i am down" maybe you mean you never left when i was ...

I think its a very cute poem. I'm not entirely sure whats going on, maybe if it was longer you would be able to explain better. my favorite part was: ...

I liked this poem... A lot of people tell me to stay away from repetition but it seems to work for you. I totally understood your meaning, which is the ...

This is really good, I like it a lot. The rhymes don't sound forced, which is good. But I was wondering what happened to them? Why do they disappear in ...

She would lay awake, in the new place, covered with a dirty comforter. Bothered by the sounds of honking car alarms, speeding motorcycles, and young Spanish voices coming up from ...

I really liked this poem. I thought it was interesting and it soothed my mind in a way. Im not totally sure if I understand it, but i like it. ...

This is a nice poem. Some rhymes felt effort less like the one in the 3rd stanza. But most of the other rhymes felt forced. I wasn't really sure what ...

Do you have the courage? The courage that it takes to stand, to stand alone. When the rest of the world is sitting on folding chairs, staring up at the ...

I think it is a very cute poem! I totally get the story. And i know at the beginning you analogized about not having any imagery. I disagree with you ...

It was a good poem. But I didn't really connect with your character. And in the 10th like where it says "I see a something." Do you mean to have ...

This is a great poem! I totally agree with clueless about adding more description. I also wasn't really sure what was going on in the poem. So if you had ...

I thought it was good. Your great at descriptions which is great because if you cant describe something then you have nothing. But what kept bothering me was when i ...

These poems were good. Some of the rhymes felt forced like with hours and connoisseur and the end and there wasn't really a rhyme scheme there were just some rhymes ...