carden

Hey, I'm Carden. So nitpicking. her body's week and her words untold I think you mean 'weak' instead of 'week'. She pray a wish, for a second chance The 'pray' ...

I had to read this book for a summer school course I took last year. I loved it. It was sad and abused foreshadowing but it just added to the ...

Review time! That was pretty awesome, I have to admit. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. :) Which is common with poems because it's all about the author's interpretation ...

Review time! Lucky for you I am picky when it comes to romance. Joy, joy! The narrative at the beginning is very Conradian (referring to Joseph Conrad and his ability ...

Review time. 8) Just one little issue I found: Soon, I was going to parish. In this line I think you meant 'perish', not 'parish'. Seeing as 'parish' means a ...

Well done. I enjoyed the simple rhyming scheme and the common words at the end of each stanza. For what it's worth, love is birth Nice. Using words that rhyme ...

First off, this was very entertaining and fun to read. Mostly because it was very realistic and easy to relate to. It seems like a stream of consciousness, which can ...

That was really nice. The descriptions were perfect because they are not overbearing but are just enough to get you there, and keep you interested. Usually with poems in this ...