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Sublime story, its greatest strength is, once again, first-person narrative (as expected from grand-master of first person narrative, Tigersprite! ). The way the story is written once again gives it ...

A week after Cero was partnered with Francesca, they received their first mission: hunting Rheal. He was unsurprised. Who was unsurprised? Rheal? Two weeks before, Rheal had attacked a clothing ...

About I like to dig deep into your story, twist its perspective and view it from different angles, and offer my opinion on its meaning. My reviews tend to be ...

I liked it. Overall, I liked it, and I will read the continuation of the story once you finish it. Conceptual: Too many coincidences. Way too many. Some are believable, ...

Hey all! Wrote this a few days ago at night. Comments are very appreciated. Thanks! It was November, and the trees spoke only in the language of the wind. The ...

Allen Gideon crouched before his son and with tender hands brushed the long dark hair out of his eyes. In normal circumstances he was a man who , despite his ...

A very effective way to go about denouncing religion. Your descriptions of the temple are so thick and rich that you could cut them with a knife, which works really ...

This seems to be inspired at least partly by Lovecraft's lush diction. I really can't tell you whether I liked this excerpt or not, mainly because I didn't understand most ...

Please review my story, The Law of Moses ( ). It's my first one posted on this site and I would like to see if the quality of the writing ...

My first story to post here! Folks, I'd just like to note - this story can be quite disturbing for some, so PLEASE don't read it if you are easily ...

I did not expect the ending... I think I would have liked to see the narrator developed more as a character. The fact that there was a secretary already sort ...

I didn't think it started slow at all, myself. The mystique of the third lane captured me right away, and the strange events unfolding after that point only strengthened the ...

Hiya dear stalker of cC's first post; There was an enlightening and insightful "Hello" message here. Such a shame you missed it, hmm? 8)