carbonCore

My current username, carbonCore, is taken from an album by Lustmord (my avatar is a carbon ring and is also the current symbol of Lustmord). The other one, D. Ein, ...

First, what's a shambler? Can you describe it a bit more. All I get is that it's a machine, that has a propeller and three legs. What type of machine ...

As he lay on the ground, taking deep, painful breaths, the man stared at the blue sky that floated above the treetops , [The sky floats?] wondering what had just ...

Hello, Flower! I have seen some of your reviews elsewhere on this site, and was left with a rather high opinion of your reviewing ability. Please review my new story ...

Hi all. This is your chance to get back at me if I've recently destroyed one of your pieces with my criticism. :) An older work of mine, but still ...

Prologue Kutho had traveled seven days to reach the city. His journey would have been shorter if he’d taken a direct path, but previous encounters with humans had taught him ...

A crack spread [I think "ran" would work better here] down the egg; allowing the milky white substance inside spill out across the warm incubator. My eyes barely opened into ...

you always covered your mouth when you smiled, invisible strings pulling your hands to hide the jostling molars, jutting canines your mother couldn’t afford to fix, I'm not seeing exactly ...

I laughed so loud when I read the last bit there. That was amazing! The only criticism I can offer is that your pretty simile there - "Lights glide over ...

The morning they headed to the vineyard by Pencarrow Head, Cero imagined a developed village with three or four factories, a cosy villa for them to stay and a pub ...

We paint our skins beautiful Strong beginning with arts of ink rings and studs We paint our outside beautiful "Outside" sounds awkward here, esp. starting with "o" like "our" before ...

The vineyard by Pencarrow Head was nothing but a discarded piece of land, no wider than a kilometre. Even the village was far useless. There were only four buildings. Two ...

Baria breathed the clean night air of the forest, calming her pulse. She placed a hand on her rounding belly, three months pregnant. Her husband of the Forest Rights was ...

Okay, first of all - and I apologize in advance for this - the heavy usage of red, the male character's name, and his speech patterns made me think of ...

A/N: This is something I was considering entering for the October contest. This is the first part of three. Hope you enjoy, reviews much appreciated. ;) It was common knowledge ...