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I won't do a full text review, as people had already picked the living daylights out of it, and instead just do a concise little thing. I'm not sure where ...

Yasmin slammed the dishwasher shut, shaking the pots and pans. "Money's on the table, give Connor his bottle at 7, blah blah blah." [Funny :D I think this miiiight work ...

I'll agree with Kyllorac above. It's crucial you get someone else to look at it. They'll point out things you don't notice, and they may save some very good passages ...

I listen to soft piano music while I write. It's the least intrusive.

My dreams rarely make sense. I envy you guys. :P The vast, overwhelming majority of my ideas come from music. Not music lyrics, no - most music I listen to ...

I write well in English, but I don't speak it very well. I speak Russian fluently, but I don't write in it very well. Kibble: ubi Romani, ibi caudeci. :)

It started with a baby. The daughter of Queen Amaria, queen of Paxtan and the most beautiful child in the kingdom. Her name was Rapunzel. On the day she was ...

Proper Shakespearean sonnet for you all! :D For long I hoped to light her heart aflame. And in the garden where she oft spent time, I once had dared to ...

Hey all! This is a collection of my older flash fiction stories (each one about 300-500 words). I thought it would be sinful to flood valuable forum space with every ...

Ivory held the end of the candle stick holder, gripping it with all her strength [I'd mention white knuckles instead of just saying "with all her strength". Think it's more ...

I liked lots of things about this prologue. The bit with Crosse threatening to "send [Lavira] back" gave me the shivers - you are quite good at writing dialogue, I'm ...

Hey again Shear! I'm not sure if I'm allowed to ask for another review so quickly after you reviewed the previous work (and besides, it doesn't happen very often that ...

I sat on my bed in complete confusion. I just didn't understand how all this could have happened. It was like one moment I thought I was a completely normal ...

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Hi Shear! Could you review my newest story Ash for me? Thanks!