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Heya B! Good job on completing your first knightly assignment. I've ditched the pony for a diesel-powered motorbike, and then drove over that jerkass prince because he insistently wouldn't notice ...

You didn't end this story, and after typing up half of a review ranting about this fact, I understood the reason behind this. There are a number of things the ...

Heya Ranger! I would like a review for my story " The Arkford Sleepidemic ", please. Thank you in advance!

I would like a review on my story, " The Arkford Sleepidemic ". Thank you in advance!

Arkford was an industrial town, no doubt about it. Below the noxious fog enveloping the town, one could sometimes see older brick smokestacks judgmentally pointing at the sky, their parent ...

I recently had a pet betta fish named Alphonso. He died a few weeks ago. No date/time cards warned me of his passing, though. :( Anyway, that aside, on to ...

Hello, hello, cC is here to review. Loved the opening. I like abstract scenes in general, which is why I really loved (and still love, I go back to re-read ...

Nalakaya; Heirress Heiress of Hell I could feel there their eyes on me, staring daggers at me. [This reads a little bit awkwardly] There their whispers had followed me ever ...

Such an overwhelming amount of negativity! How did you manage to compact all of that into one vignette? It boggles the mind (but at the same time isn't very surprising, ...

I commend you for your bravery in approaching this topic. It's not one that a lot of people choose to touch. I do have a partial interest in this, because ...

Once upon a time, there was a fish. That is the story; the rest is detail. The details begin – as far as anyone can tell – with the day ...

Hidey-ho, I am here to review! First off: love the idea. Love the bits of magical realism going on. A person with no friends finding one is a favourite topic ...

Hey Pink! Don't think that your stalker has forgotten about you! Awesome poem, and I don't think there's a problem with it not flowing well. It feels choppy and I ...

*deep breath* Alright, here we go. :) As usual, I'm not going to spend any time reviewing technical aspects of this work like word choice, grammar, or spelling, because I ...

Here to review! First of all, I'm going to have to agree with Canis about the whole wordiness issue. I can see the theme of individuality in your story, but ...