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The only poem I ever wrote was for the sake of challenge. It's a proper Shakespearean sonnet, with ten feet in each line, with the proper rhyming pattern, all that ...

No technical errors on your part, it seems. I might have formatted this story slightly differently, but that's neither here nor there. Fun to see the world's pantheons joining up, ...

Azila : For her epic reviews and responsible modding. There will someday be a piece that I will write just to read Azila's review of it. Thank you!

Wot? When I think "British stereotype", I think prisoners in top hats & monocles having a cuppa and discussing amongst each other the most elaborate way of disemboweling prostitutes. In ...

I looked up and found myself in the middle of Cityplace near Downtown West Palm Beach, Florida. I looked around, [There was a semicolon here, and I removed it. It ...

[Firstly, notice how I formatted your story with line breaks. Try formatting it this way - it makes it a lot easier to read] I looked at my small body ...

Hmm. No, I disagree. - Spelling and grammar make the vessel of the story. If the vessel is malfunctioning, whatever is inside it will not make it to its destination. ...

"Mom?" I called out, as I opened the front door to the house that I onced once lived in. I probably should have been working on my paper for one ...

This is amazing. Simply sublime. I re-read this story several times, and there's still nothing I can find wrong with it. Odd, that: usually I chop apart even the best ...

Hello there, Dreamer. I don't believe we've had any contact on this site yet, other than my posting a rebuttal to your article about talking heads. :) Here I am ...

...eh, it was pretty good. >.>

"Mom?" I called out, as I opened the front door to the house that I lived in for twenty three years until I had moved out to live with my ...

Looks like most of you guys are doing something akin to a flash story rather than an actual description. Well, I'll give it a shot. Since you wished me such ...

Okay, let me explain it like this. Writing is similar to thought, yes? It's an ever shifting being, a state of thought that's constantly growing. Why write the same thing ...

Thanks Idry! Loved your story, very cute and a tad touching. Also, I love how it was dedicated to me. :D Makes me feel all warm and tingly inside!