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Interesting, though on closest inspection if one wafts the wind around this story, one gets the subtlest smell of cheesiness. I suppose what I'm trying to say is that this ...

Excellent story! I read of a mother who would put the contents of her infant daughter's diaper into her IV, and then keep a blog about her sick kid. I ...

'Lo, a review for this would be appreciated:

Boom! Bang! Things happen! Things that affect the character's entire life! And there's absolutely no context! Bang! other words, this is not a story. It's a clip from the middle ...

18+ When a gnat is given the power of a bear, chaos reigns. Xaero, Quake 3 Arena The cold morning's wind blew leaves from the balcony down onto the people ...

A/N: A villanelle. Views expressed therein may or may not reflect my actual opinions. For that which lies within of every one of us, both young and old, will soon ...

From the great short-story humourists, I highly advise you to take a look at Jerome K. Jerome or O. Henry.

There is a surprising amount of insight in this story. I don't know if it can actually happen that a person becomes irrationally angry at everything due to grief, but ...

Let me describe my approximate thought process as I read this. "Ooh, a new poster in the Fantasy forums. Let's see what they've got. *clicks on story* Nice opening sentence. ...

Very good, I like this story. *like* Though it isn't a story as such but more of a character sketch / scene, it still does get some feelings across. Can't ...

I was....... exactly the same as I am now. :D But I've only been around for six months.

Calibri and Helvetica

In four words: good premise, bad execution. I was a little bit surprised, actually, given that the last story I reviewed by you was really good. This story is not ...

... I'm getting a feeling that this is a delusion on Darrel's part. Me being me, I habitually see into works a bit (or perhaps a lot) deeper than the ...

Mmmmm, alright, alright, I can see the connection here. When I posted that song, I intended for people to write a story that follows the same tonal/emotional pattern as the ...