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This story reads like a big, great metaphor for something - and I don't mean just the simple theme of "sometimes beautiful things are bad". Hopefully I'll figure out exactly ...

Second person works for this piece. My personal opinion on second person is that pieces written in it come in two varieties: either deeply emotional pieces written compulsively, on a ...

A great story! Very fun. Very fun to read, very fun to think about. Good to see an apocalypse story that doesn't take itself as seriously as the rest of ...

Ego! Pls review this: Thanks!

BigDaddyDawg hits the nail on the head there-- the story itself was confusing, odd, and overall not as enjoyable as I think you could have made it, but it's the ...

A very good flash, I liked it. Your prose reads as if you are somebody who gets inspired mainly by music and art, not literature. If that is so, then ...

As I told another beloved YWSer once, "My mind was blown by all the pretty words and sentence structures, of course, but it was blown so hard that I forgot ...

A few things. 1. Run this through a spell-checker, and then re-read it yourself several times. "Except", not "accept"; "you're", not "your"; "moving" would be better style than "movin". I ...

Long ago when the world was still young, there was no light and all was darkness. The many different races of creatures could never tell the days apart. To them ...

A cool twist of the Siren myth! Though one must ask what kind of things she's growing in that garden of hers. :D "Smelt" should be "smelled"; "smelt" means to ...

Oh my goodness! Hahaha, you made my day. :D I don't think I laughed this hard at a story since I read "The Interruption", which had one of the most ...

Thanks, yo!

Azila-- I would like a review on Stains of Red , my newest work. I think it's very much an Azila piece! Danke sehr!

Dearest, Three people burned to their deaths today, and no-one even asked any questions. Perhaps those men deserved it? I cannot know. Though the crowd - you should have seen ...