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Heya! Welcome to you, all new folks (but especially Luckypelt since it's her thread :D ). If you've got any questions at all, feel free to send them my way. ...

When I was little, I would draw these people on pieces of paper, cut them out, and then play with them like they were action figures -- we didn't have ...

Renegade Church Enforcer Name: Reverend Vladimir Burn Gender: Male Age: 48 Ability Set/Skills: Very high physical strength Appearance: Bald. A mountain of a man, muscles upon muscles. Wears a monk's ...

Stela: done!

Heya Stela; sorry it took me a while to get to this. It's been hard to get free time lately. So overall, this piece did not leave me hollow. It ...

Gack, stupid notifications. -_- Cannon & Cam: Done!

Sorry for the late review, my notifications didn't really let me know that someone posted on my thread. Odd, that. First of all, you characterize so many individuals, but you ...

Got most of my Sunday freed up just for this.

So this is based on Rome's origin story, yes? The twins Romulus and Remus. I have a book with a whole bunch of wolf-related legends, so I've heard of it ...

I'm glad to see that you've added the crown bit we had talked about earlier, but I'd still recommend a re-write (even though we both agreed that those are nigh ...

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Heya IKW, Well, this needs some work. While the idea of parallel worlds (and forbidden worlds) is interesting, I found a few problems with the text itself. - Polishing. You ...

Hi, Syn. This review will be rough. - Style. you constantly use words like "I guess" and "stuff" and "literally" and "I swear". This is not literary writing. Your piece ...

Rammstein! Black Dahlia Murder!

Thorium-232 (Get it? Get it? hee hee)