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So I've read this three times, on two separate days, before I felt ready to type up a review. This is quite a phenomenal piece, and I've felt dread in ...

Ah, this was a neat little vignette. Stylistically solid writing, something of a minor plot, more or less a satisfying conclusion. But I think there are many more places you ...

I was always under the impression that the beauty of such ultra-short stories is that, despite their length, a plot may be seen (or extrapolated) from the bare start that ...

After two read-throughs, my impression of the story is such: this is about twin sisters, one of whom is dead, communicating with each other via some unexplored means (I suspect, ...

//o_o how does Arose know that there is someone worth hunting in the inn?// It was early. A creaky window shutter moved to the wind, filling the lower rooms of ...

Name: Alois Busquerup Gender: Male Age: Looks in his late twenties Description of Appearance and Picture: A young-looking face but with mildly wrinkled skin and silver hair. Kind of like ...

Snowflakes fell like suicidal angels from the sky, dying by the hundreds in Elene's shuddering breath. She didn't dare leave the rags she slept in back in the alley - ...

There was no reason she had woken up in the middle of the night. There was no ghost, no trace, no tracks, nothing that had not been there before. But ...

Name: Eleandra (aka Elene) Liocz Gender: F Age: 24 Description of Appearance: Usually wears plain, unremarkable clothing. Hair of dark auburn, wavy and down to her neck. Soft, round facial ...

Dedicated to Kamas!

The point-form thing is kind of important. It's what makes list sites like Cracked so successful. Information broken up into manageable pieces keeps the reader's attention far better than a ...

Pretty photographs. Could you make the captions even smaller, though? I think I can still read it if I squint really hard and push the screen against my face.

Heya A/B. Well, it's been a while since I've done a real review for you, so I suppose this is a good time and place to remedy this situation. So ...

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First off, the other reviews are baffling me. Did you guys even read the piece? What do you mean, "what happens next"? She dies, that's what happens. She was the ...