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This debate could be a lot of fun if you guys would loosen up and say which you think is cooler, instead of telling me about the differences between the ...

The words "complete story" caught my eye, but it seems as though I was a victim of false advertisement. This seems less a story and more a prologue. I will ...

There are two main ways that I'm aware of to create suspense. One is the brute-force method, which you attempt here and which authors such as H. P. Lovecraft have ...

I loved the quiet, the peacefulness, the solitary pleasure of life. It was as if there was nothing I could not do. These two sentences seem to clash a little ...

What is the difference between the music of rap and hip-hop?

Banned for androgyny.

Banned for making a veiled sexual reference! And I take the liberty to ban myself for having a filthy mind!

b& for being a pokemon!

Couldn't have there been a simple "No" option with no strings attached? I neither wish my characters spoke to me, nor do I force them to talk. I just write.

If I had to go ahead and describe this work in two words, with all its ups and downs and sideways, the two words would be "like Solstice". Like Solstice, ...

I'm on three right now, and I've got two more lined up to review. After that, one or two more to seal the deal would be good.

I didn't write a review for the previous scene, mainly because I felt I couldn't say enough to fill an entire review -- which is a good thing -- so ...

I'm here again! So this part right here amused me: I've known you since you were born! It's interesting because it's his mother that says this. It's as if an ...

I'll chime in. If your character is fighting with someone with a larger sword than a katana, then it will probably be the katana that breaks. Western swords had the ...

Hey Zo-- I've decided I'll go through every scene of the play you have so far and review them in sequence. So expect more soon! The one thing that jumped ...