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caraluvsmusic

Not your stereotypical teenager...

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Snow Fall

    No problem :)

    Feb 26, 2015
  • Lyrics » Horror, Realistic Re: Heartbreak Hotel (Edit 2)

    Yep... :)

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » Horror, Realistic Re: Heartbreak Hotel (Edit 2)

    I'm not sure. It's whatever you imagine. I can't express in writing, only in pictures what this truly means to me.

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » Horror, Realistic Re: Heartbreak Hotel (Edit 2)

    I guess everyone comprehends things differently :D

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » Horror, Realistic Re: Heartbreak Hotel (Edit 2)

    Thank you for your review! I'll take some of your suggestions into consideration :)

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » Horror, Realistic Re: Heartbreak Hotel (Edit 2)

    Thank you for your review. To be quite honest, I didn't know that Elvis song existed. And that one part, it's not supposed to make an extreme amount of sense, ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » Horror, Realistic Re: Heartbreak Hotel (Edit 2)

    Thank you for the feedback

    Feb 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Snow Fall

    I really love this. The theme is beautifully conceptual. The vocabulary you used fits in perfect with the theme. Great job!!!

    Feb 14, 2015


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price