captain.classy

Hi there! This is a wonderful little story about how the moon and sun came to be. I really don't have any corrections on the plot, so I'm just going ...

Hi there! Haha, I love it. Such a twist of irony, and there is a definite moral to this story. Good work! I think you can do a bit of ...

Hi there! Wow wow wooow. This is a very good piece, and from what I read from this you are a very good writer! Quotes 'N' Comments Some said that ...

Hi there! Aw, this is so cute. I really, really like it. However, like every story on here, there are some things that I think can be altered so the ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Ahaha this story is so cute. It's one of those stories that you tell as a joke with your friends, trying to make up something ...

Hi there! This is really good, and really, really entertaining. I think you told the story well, as if you were an grandparent telling their grandchild the story of ancient ...

Hi there! This is really cute. You definitely tried to capture the prompt well, however I think you could exaggerate a bit more, but we'll get into that later. I ...

Hi there! Aww this is so sad. :( And I only say that because my sister is the youngest kid in the family and I love her more than anything. ...

HI EL OMG. So, this was good. And definitely interesting. In fact, I didn't want to stop reading, until the end. The killing part... happened so quickly, I don't know. ...

Hey there! This is really cool. I think it's very important for writers to write things like this, even if it's not included in the novel, or overall story. You ...

Hi El! So, I hate to say it El, because I love your writing, you're seriously very good, but this is boring. I think that the main reason why this ...

Hi there! xD was my initial reaction. This is so funny, but at the same time I know it has a serious side to it? Anyways, I assume that the ...

Hi there! So, I read the comment about this being about the first mission in Call of Duty, and then I googled it and you seemed to have used the ...

Hi there! This is cool, and seems like you were writing your thoughts directly down on paper, which is why it flowed so well. It's also the reason why this ...

Hi there! Aww this is so darn cute! I really like this idea of the reflection. I think the only negative thing I have to say about it is that ...