captain.classy

It's pretty darn cute. 1. The hands on the side of the face. At first, I thought they were just large extended ears. They aren't very human-like. And I know ...

This was very cute. 1. The parrot on the left looks old and worn out. If you meant to do that on purpose, I say hey! good job. But, if ...

10/10. I can't help but wonder if this is what you really look like... :)

So short! A man in uniform answered the door and led us into the parlor. Uniform, to me, sounds like a man dressed in a Navy, Marines, Army uniform, not, ...

Foreeeest. Okay, now that that's over... I only spotted a few things, but that's because I wasn't really looking. ;) Why, did me, being the oldest be the homely one? ...

Eep! No, of course the month when I have finals...

Pecan! You are a lovely follower on my story, I thought I should start to repay you. (plus you asked on chat) blooming with intensity. This line doesn't really fit ...

Stella! Okay, now that that's over... I got chills while reading this. I think you conveyed a beautiful message here. You spoke like a true transcendentalist. You described nature for ...

Thanks guys, that was very helpful. My characters are all untrained, unskilled people. They were basically put in this position to learn. I will have to use a chase scene, ...

I'm finding it really hard to get going with my story The Last Storm . I mean, sure I am doing fine-have four chapter done already. But, I'm getting to ...

Banned for writing a long scentence I didn't want to read!

Whilst he had been standing like a melon with his hands raised and his face weeping with blood, Carter had just stood there. I feel like the ‘stood’ should be ...

I think I am going to start doing review here before I post my story, but I was wondering something. If you already posted a few chapters of this in, ...

Whitman is my inspiration for everything in life. The most brilliant man to every walk the dirt of America.

This is beautiful. I love how halfway through it you start ranting on 'all from's. You are a poet, that's for sure. I would very much like to know who ...