captain.classy

I'm starting to wish that we still had old fashioned televisions I'm sorry to say that this does not fit in with the letter. The writer seems to be in ...

I find it impossible to do a serious review on this! Why do you stand there and just Moo? Moo shouldn't be capitalized. I think you are funny, but I ...

I like the concept. I like how you showed us the two very different opinions of these two very different people. What I don't like is the rhyming scheme, and ...

I saw you quite recently, In fact it was less then a week, I really don't like the second use of these lines. They make your poem sound like a ...

This is going to start sounding like a list. I really like your idea, I don't like the use of parenthesis. They are not very poetic, and are not needed. ...

As vividly as the night-time sky. I really like this line. It really ties everything that you are saying together. I would like you to end with the 'great minds ...

But, the tears I shed, They are for you, The 'they' should not be capitilized. I really liked this, actually. I mean, sure the subject of love is a little ...

They are defiantly adorable, I will tell you that! The only thing I don't like is something in the first picture. The little boys face is too white. His eyes ...

This is something more of a basis for a work much bigger. I think you can take this and expand on it! I want more of a story. Why doesn't, ...

The sun is setting, setting The summer sun is setting and A harvest moon, He saw a harvest moon, So I don't like how you repeated these things here. It ...

While she is so, I have not health this was the only part I found awkward. The last part, after the comma, well, to me, it just doesn't make sense. ...

It was raining, the day she came. Delete the comma. the water dripped down her red mask, down the forehead, down the brow and to the eye so it was ...

Yeller! This is amazing. I disagree with everyone else. I like her big leg, I like her curves. It makes her different from the other angel! I mean, not all ...

(Can you tell me what you think? I am going to use this for my creative writing presentation) Sitting around the fire, sipping warmed chocolate and unwrapping presents. Watching classic ...

Thanks guys! Uhm... so the story of this is kind of weird... My aunt used to have a dog named Emma who looked nothing like this. Then I made up ...