captain.classy

She had never seen herself in a mirror before, but the boots her opposite wore gave the fact away. This really confused me. I had to go back and read ...

Sheldon is my boyfriend! ahh My favorite show on Mondays on that channel is How I Met Your Mother. I am a super fan. I own every season and everything. ...

I don't feel like this is a poem. I feel like this is a diary rant, something some one would write about heartbreak in solitude. For it to be more ...

Very interesting story, but I will say that you are moving too fast. I think you should have at least one more encounter with Eric before she just up and ...

Woah. You have finally written the story that I have nothing to correct! haha just kidding. Okay: I took in a breath before answering. Usually I don’t say anything about ...

Oh my goodness! It's both Classy and a Dino! I really like the coloring. It looks airbrushed, what did you use? And what is that thing on the tongue?? It ...

Please let me know if this moves too fast. Chapter Four “Hey,” Zach stood up, knife in hand. I was happy to see he stayed in charge while we were ...

“Nothing oh grumpy one.” I mutter ed , sw ing on my heels and continu ing my lonesome journey. So you changed tenses here. The 'ing's are present, and the ...

Poisoned by pity, compassion, guilt, love, I would say: ... compassion, guilt, and love." It just seems to flow better. I don't really get why you call them crocodile tears. ...

Your 13 year old must be very smart, because when I was thirteen, I was not able to write things like this. If I can ask, what problems was she ...

Hmm... what to say about this. I want to start out saying your descriptions are wonderful. When you were commenting on the snow hitting the lone wolf's fur, I could ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you. So many poems on this site have a problem with sticking with their centrel theme till the very end, but you did. You pretty ...

Peole think could never relate I think you meant 'people.' I think you need to add more poetic phrases to this. Such as, what colors were the eyes? Maybe relate ...

I agree with the above. The poem flows very well, and I much enjoyed reading it. There was a certain original twist to it. I only noticed one thing: Warrior, ...

‘...Such a word does not exist in this realm.’ oo. *chills* It was also just the right size for slipping in her rations, consisting of stale bread and spiritless wine ...