captain.classy

All done, everyone. By the way, coco, I already reviewed chapter 8, so I moved on to chapter 9.

oo. Seems too good to be true! I'm a little scared. :P Nitty Pickies I know I am privileged to be in imperial palace of the king and enjoying a ...

Classy here, as requested. I had hurt him deeply, I really like to point this out to writers because it improves stories so much. This is an example of 'show ...

Haha, I adore your enthusiasm! Just to let you know, when you are typing, the box your typing in has a little button called "check spelling" on the top right ...

Hiya! Classy, master of sketching (haha) is here! I really like this. I am a bit thrown off by you not finishing the nose, but as for the mouth, I ...

You have left me, again, with nothing to correct. Triston stood back on the generous arms of the tree that, in that moment, seemed so much wiser than we ever ...

All finished! Thanks for the requests everyone. Classy

Very interesting! I'm sorry I won't be able to comment on the story in full, but I have some nit-picks for you! “C’mon sleepy,” a calm masculine voice replied. -comma ...

Before I get to my harshness, let me just say you have a beautiful and casual voice, and I loved reading your work. Nit-Pickiness: When I first woke up, I ...

but if there is one thing I have learned most, is that pain, leaves beautiful scars. All the mistakes I found were in your last two lines. The 'but' should ...

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Goodness, this was so sad and heartfelt! I am a bit confused by the last two lines though. I feel like you didn't explain them much- I apologize if it's ...

*big interest* :) They are not going to have Orlando Bloom in it though! He's my lover.

Yeller, I love your art. You are different from anyone on this site. And yes that includes myself. :P I love your airbrushed technique. How do you do such a ...

Woah! You have me hooked. The last few lines... I just found it amazing. What a wonderful way to write a story. I am still wondering about the person who ...