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captain.classy

  • Other Poetry Re: Dirty Fashion

    I love this! It's so original! It makes me smile, haha. I wouldn't say "living Plastic" Some people probably won't know what that is. I mean, it's a cool line ...

    Jan 29, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Fallen Apple

    I just want to say that I love this. You should feel honored, because I never say that I love poems. haha I love how original this is! Telling the ...

    Jan 29, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Messages Post 2

    Woah woah woah. Random much? Since when did this turn into a vampire story? Please please don't make it about vampires. It is not classy (haha) and it is overused. ...

    Jan 29, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Small Steps

    Hey hey! Classy here, as requested! The way the light glinted off the keen blade formed halos on teh walls. -the spelt wrong The way the light glinted off the ...

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Questions/Answers

    Because it reminds you of snow cones. :P

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: To Classy and Silent

    Mizz, I love how in your review, "I like the dinosaur aspect of the dino being Classy." Classy is not usually capitalized dear! :P Yeller, lets do another one of ...

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Smile

    Hiya OverEasy! Classy here for a review. :) --perhaps he was the punch line-- This line... I don't like it at all - at least the way it was written. ...

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Winter is a Live Mind

    Hiya! Classy here, let us begin. A gray prayer to the slate-eyed winter. So I don't really get what the slate is supposed to mean here. I even looked the ...

    Jan 28, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    Hey girl. I'm trying to get my friend into this site, but her work isn't being reviewed. Would you do it for me? Thanks

    Jan 28, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    Hey girl! I want my friend to get into this web site, but her work isn't being reviewed. Would you mind doing it for me?

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: London Payback

    Very interesting. You need some help on grammar, though. (: I will only point out a few things, though there were many mistakes in here. “Come on Sam” shouted Simon ...

    Jan 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Usual Navidad

    This is so great! I love the part in the beginning, with the naked people. I like it, but at the same time, I don't know why you mentioned it. ...

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Messages

    Nit Pickiness! She ignored her alarm clock when it beeped at 6:30 AM, telling her to wake up and her mother when she came in the room at 6:45 AM ...

    Jan 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Would Could Should

    Good poem, but I would like you to show us more. You seem to just be telling readers what they should believe, what they should think like. I don't necessarily ...

    Jan 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: To Touch (1)

    “Do you love me?” Of course I do. “I wish I could hear you say it.” I wish I could say it. “I wish I could see your hands say ...

    Jan 27, 2010


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