captain.classy

Hiya! Classy here! Let us begin. at four feet tall, he was big- even for his species. This sentence does not make sense, the 'even for his species' part. If ...

Hiya! Classy here! Now that that's over, on to the review. I really like this. You have such a poetic voice. In fact, while I was reading, I was thinking ...

haha. I'm still unranked! oops.

and Impossible going back; And do not let yourself slack. I feel like you're having trouble with this line. The number of syllables just doesn't flow. I would suggest a ...

Hiya, Classy here! Let's see what we can do... Black. Black is the fist which punches Accept it. Accept it and drag your ravaged frame from one day to the ...

Woo! *is excited!*

Next chapter is up.

Elena sat on a floor of what looked and smelled like some rusty old prison. Moss and decayed wood roamed about, maybe she was in a forest. “Great a forest ...

“Penny, where have you been?” my mother spat. Any other teenage might have given her a sarcastic remark, but I loved her so much that I was unable to do ...

I'm the biter? blehh

Hiya! Classy here! let us see what I can do. I deserve all the things You said to me So these lines make the poem not flow well. They are ...

Wow, such a powerful poem LighHawk! Sickness to insanity I question my humanity. I really like these lines. They are the most powerful in your entire poem. A very nice ...

All done Flute!

Okay, first off, Van's name is not Freyja, it's evilsnakelady. Haha Okay, here I go. I like this, highly original. I wish you would have extended your metaphor of her ...

Oh to color! I'm sorry I didn't get that. Thanks for clearning it up for me.