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  • Art & Photography Re: It's a frog. :)

    It's going to be hard to review this, but here I go. 1. The angle is a bit awkward. I feel as though I am inside the tank, but not ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: It's a frog. :)

    Resume editing It's going to be hard to review this, but here I go. 1. The angle is a bit awkward. I feel as though I am inside the tank, ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: When we made gods. (test run)

    Hiya! Classy here, let us begin. Nitpickiness: The Deer crouched for a moment and lifted it's head to a branch overhang that creaked from some unseen stress, then, it leapt. ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love James - beginning

    It was always interesting staying with Aunt Penelope, so by living with her for a year, I should be able to write a book of all the wacky ideas she ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: 40 of the Best Web Sites for Young Writers

    Of course YWS is number one. I have looked around and even asked my creative writing teacher for good sites, and this is the best one. Go YWS!

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: My Monsoon

    Hiya! Classy here to review. Always a few raindrops between friends, This was the only line that that struck me as something I needed to comment on. I really want ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Other Re: A nice joke speech!

    Okay, for one, McDonalds is way better than Burger King. And so is Wendy's. Burger King's burgers taste like... nothing! Get your facts straight! :) hehe Classy

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: One Night With You

    This poem was very random. I'll try to point out what I mean. in the dark, the fear, So, I don't really like 'the fear' here. I feel you you ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: And Yet You Still Love Me.

    Hiya! Classy here. This was quite enjoyable, though a bit on the cliche side. And Yet You Still Love heart is a fire,Burning my happiness.Enflaming my joy,Smoldering my head is ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fatuous

    Classy here! Let us start. But im made to feel like this Should be I'm, or I am. I liked this. I like the little bit of bliblical referance. It ...

    Feb 3, 2010
  • Grammar & Research Re: Effect vs. Affect

    You saved my life with this. This is the number one thing I have trouble with.

    Feb 2, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]

    Thanks so much Pink!

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The River That Weeps (Edited and refurbished!)

    Olli! Okay, now that that's over, let us get reviewing! The water flexed it's 'fingers' and lunged for the beaver. She was standing by 'The Weeping River'. So, you use ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 101 Ways to Die #7 - #8

    It's me! It's my death! Okay, so in chat I said that I was going to go and review your works because I felt that you would write about me ...

    Jan 31, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Messages: Chapter One

    Wow Cres. Wow. He wanted to see one of my pieces of artwork and I told him, I’d email him a picture if he sent me some of his writing. ...

    Jan 30, 2010


Stupidity's the deliberate cultivation of ignorance.
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