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Re: It's a frog. :)
It's going to be hard to review this, but here I go. 1. The angle is a bit awkward. I feel as though I am inside the tank, but not ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: It's a frog. :)
Resume editing It's going to be hard to review this, but here I go. 1. The angle is a bit awkward. I feel as though I am inside the tank, ...
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Re: When we made gods. (test run)
Hiya! Classy here, let us begin. Nitpickiness: The Deer crouched for a moment and lifted it's head to a branch overhang that creaked from some unseen stress, then, it leapt. ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Love James - beginning
It was always interesting staying with Aunt Penelope, so by living with her for a year, I should be able to write a book of all the wacky ideas she ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: 40 of the Best Web Sites for Young Writers
Of course YWS is number one. I have looked around and even asked my creative writing teacher for good sites, and this is the best one. Go YWS!
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: My Monsoon
Hiya! Classy here to review. Always a few raindrops between friends, This was the only line that that struck me as something I needed to comment on. I really want ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: A nice joke speech!
Okay, for one, McDonalds is way better than Burger King. And so is Wendy's. Burger King's burgers taste like... nothing! Get your facts straight! :) hehe Classy
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: One Night With You
This poem was very random. I'll try to point out what I mean. in the dark, the fear, So, I don't really like 'the fear' here. I feel you you ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: And Yet You Still Love Me.
Hiya! Classy here. This was quite enjoyable, though a bit on the cliche side. And Yet You Still Love heart is a fire,Burning my happiness.Enflaming my joy,Smoldering my head is ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Fatuous
Classy here! Let us start. But im made to feel like this Should be I'm, or I am. I liked this. I like the little bit of bliblical referance. It ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Effect vs. Affect
You saved my life with this. This is the number one thing I have trouble with.
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Thanks so much Pink!
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The River That Weeps (Edited and refurbished!)
Olli! Okay, now that that's over, let us get reviewing! The water flexed it's 'fingers' and lunged for the beaver. She was standing by 'The Weeping River'. So, you use ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: 101 Ways to Die #7 - #8
It's me! It's my death! Okay, so in chat I said that I was going to go and review your works because I felt that you would write about me ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Messages: Chapter One
Wow Cres. Wow. He wanted to see one of my pieces of artwork and I told him, I’d email him a picture if he sent me some of his writing. ...
Jan 30, 2010
