captain.classy

I have posted many drafts of this story on here. But, I think I've finally found it. The perfect beginning. I hope you all like it. There's more to come. ...

Okay, I see. Thanks for that!

Just to provide you with the basics-- So this is very unnecessary, I think. It's not very poetic, and makes your poem seem like you're making a list, which is ...

This was very interesting. Now onto the review. “Doctor Williams,” said a dry, deep, hoarse voice. Who is saying this? He was Jack Gareth. He was 14 You already said ...

Pink! Okay, here, as requested. I whipped it forwards and slapped the back of Mark’s head . His head bobbed and I heard the satisfying sound of hand on head ...

Pecan! I loves you! haha okay, on to the review. So I really like this. I love the title especially. It reminded me of the Beatles. But, it also reminded ...

Hiya, Classy here. Phew! I am so glad you don't have dialogue in here. Lol, just kidding. So I am very confused. I also think you should have added more ...

Hiya! You caught my attention, though the way this is written annoys me. Don't take it personally, I just am very strict about caps and punctuation. So one, the caps ...

A very random poem. Let me elaborate: I would cut through the paper-thin paper Okay, so this line is getting me nowhere. You say that the paper is paper-thin? Does ...

Hiya, Classy here. Let's get started... Your story is very 'cliche.' If you don't know what that means, it's boring, overused, and uninteresting. Not saying your story isn't uninteresting, just ...

Okay I nominate you, Lucy, for having an amazing Avatar. Barney is my babe. haha

Hiya, Classy here! On to the review: Just a few nit picks: The sky was filled with soft cottony clouds that caressed the sun’s rays with a light touch; I ...

I have redone this story so many times... still trying to find the right one. Comments greatly appreciated. Love you all. (: Just because there were no metal bars, didn’t ...

I don't like people leaving! :(

I don't care if you and everyone else in the world hates this, I love it. (just saying.) And I don't say that a bunch with YWS poetry, so bravo. ...