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Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.10) [newly edited]
I've already read this, so I really have nothing to say. I think you need more explanation of Tristan and her relationship. I'm still not sure why he is so ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Jump part 2
Here I am! Finally! The man bellowed, and Marks head throbbed with a sudden pain. He looked at the chair. In his mind, he pictured it hitting the man. This ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Jump part 1
Hiya, I'm about to read the part you requested, but thought I'd read this first. Susan followed the strange, bald man in the white lab coat. However, she wasn’t sure ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Jurassic Park: El Infierno Verde
Haha *inside joke much?* I'm going to bed now, will review later. Saw it and had to comment. *saves space for epic review* :P EDIT: This review will not be ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Biffle1
Uhm... why am I not on that list? You and I are best friends forever! I still call you by your original name! Now that says something!
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Where did I put my car keys?
In your purse! hehe
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: The Locust King - Chapter 1
This story seems very promising. I think the best thing about his piece is the transition between the two people in the car, and when they reach their hotel room. ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: An Ordeal of the Titanic
*likes* I enjoyed this. I would have proffered more information, more plot, but these are journal entries, and who has much time to write when they're about to die? I ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Environmentally friendly foods vs. regular
You smart little boy you. haha
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: The World Is Dying (Prologue)
This is very interesting Olli. I don't have much to comment on, since there isn't much here. All I would like to say is that I don't believe you need ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Environmentally friendly foods vs. regular
No idea, but I do know that the new Sunchips bags are biodegradable. Woo!
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Death's Blossom -- Prologue
Arris! I saw this was yours and just had to read it. This was a good read. It was a bit confusing. How you left us with nothing, it can ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Only Sixteen
The thing is, that the ten year age gap between a 16 year old and a 26 year old is huge. It's between a minor and an adult, it's illegal.
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Photo Exhibition [2]
I always love your pictures. The first one is a bit boring, at least to me. It's all gray and white! I would add some color to it maybe, like ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Papillion Prologue Part 2
Here's link one. I've posted many different versions of Papillion, but I've finally got the right one, and this is it. I hope whoever reads it likes it. Papillion Prologue ...
Mar 7, 2010
