captain.classy

I'm ashamed to say it, but I listen to Bella's Lullaby when I write. It's just a beautiful classical piano song. I love the piano, and it's one of the ...

Character Palate: Name: Emily Pierce Gender: Female Age: 16 Grade: Junior Picture: Personality: Very quiet. She doesn't like to talk to anyone. She isn't rude, she just doesn't trust anyone. ...

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I'm heeere! Although this was very short, I felt like I was reading on forever. I can't tell if it is a good thing or a bad thing yet. At ...

Don't worry! You'll find your rhythm soon enough! :)

You asked the right person (haha) I am Native American, and know almost everything about Native American culture. [*]What was the young women's role in their culture? - Women played ...

I submitted this to a contest, and I would like to know what's wrong with it. Haha

Haha, that's funny because when I first read it I was like "is that how you spell Attila the Hun? I really like it, and really have nothing bad to ...

Review on chapter 3: Hey again, here for the final review. I hate to keep correcting grammatical errors, but I have to. Grandma Rose, Delilah and Chloe was fixing spaghetti ...

Review for chapter 2: Pickyness: It’s body was rigid with scales and battle scars, it‘s bat-like wings was rotted. I don't know if you know the difference between 'its' and ...

Hey! I felt bad seeing that you haven't received any criticism yet, and thought I would drop in! :P The town that they both lived in was small and dusty. ...

Chapter 1 review: Her ash-blonde hair was in perfect place, softly falling on her shoulders, her emerald green eyes, was filling with tears. Too much. I have been told I ...

I love this. This is a perfect example of 'show not tell.' You showed it to me. Instead of telling me you love this creature (a dog, is it?) you ...

This is very different... not bad... just different. I'd like to say I know what's going on, but I have no clue. Is the main character actually a jaguar? Where ...

This sounds interesting! I'm going to try it out. Profile: Name- Mary Pierce Age- 13 Gender- female History- Was a spoiled child. Everything she wanted, she got. So now, in ...