captain.classy

Classy here! The only thing I'm afraid of is that if you're using these characters for the rest of the story, then you have started the action too early. The ...

Sounds cute, and promising! The number one thing I would like you to focus on is your tense. This story seems to be written in mostly past tense, but in ...

Everyone was leaving the party, so I decided to, also. Alexis gave me a big friendly hug. I was happy, for once. People at the part - well most of ...

Emily The party is very strange. There are so many different things going on with these people that I would have never expected. I loved how Ollie was talking to ...

Everyone seems to be having mountains of fun, so why am I not? I’m standing, hidden in the shadowy corner, watching people dancing, flirting… drinking, for God’s sakes. But… it’s ...

What's steam punk? Stories about bikers in a sauna? ahahaha, good one. ;) Welcome to YWS! Yes, please do explain what that is!

So... in Calculus, Alexis was passing out birthday invitations. She saw me staring at them, and gave me one. I felt like it was out of pity. I mean, she ...

Noo! But you do need to see it! *sad face*

There really was no need for that comment.

I wrote a poem for poem day... It was a sunny day and new was in the air. A bee to a blossom, a leaf to the wind. I was ...

Very true, very true. It didn't seem like younger children would enjoy it much. They'd get bored.

I know!! I loove him!

My boyfriend:

Creepy and weird, yes. Villain? not so sure... The only villainous thing you do is not spell anything right! :P

Let me just start by saying, "I luvee Butterzz!" haha, anyways... You're amazing. You have done so much for your age, and I don't think I'll ever do half of ...