captain.classy

Wow, Pecan, this was amazing. You know when you read pieces and the words seem as if they are actually coming out of a person's lips? Well that's how I ...

Hey, Classy here. Time for the review. The only group of people not struggling was the Kynsar. So, I'm pretty sure it's "The only group of people not struggling were ...

We take any form of writing/art as long as it can be printed onto a page. (okay I probably shouldn't say that, but you get the idea) So yes! You ...

Hey there! Classy here again. Confusion This piece was so much better than your first, but I am seriously confused. I can't make it obvious that I'm leaving him for ...

Hey there! Classy here to review. Grammar I'm not one to point out grammar, but I would just like to tell you that a lot of your commas are misplaced ...

I love writing short stories. And I hate saying this, but I never read short stories. That's maybe why I aim for novels, even though I stink at writing them. ...

kay, well I really want to start, so hurry up peeps!

How many more people do we need?

Emily "So, where should you take me?" he asked. He smiled up at me. He knew he could control me, manipulate me. I hated him. "I don't know, Jared. Where ...

Ugh, sorry this has taken so long. I've been really busy with my magazine and all that... So, pretty much when I read this, all I see it "I love ...

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Hey butters! I don't know how I'm going to follow the great reviews above, but I'll try. :) My bones chill and I can smell the coffee on the I ...

You have a rather interesting style, I like it. There are really no things I can actually say, since you use a different style, I cannot tell what is a ...

Another vampire story. I will not talk about the vampire-ness, for the sake of being negative. haha She was just waiting there, for the end. To be killed. She was ...

Emily "Oh, well do you want to get together some time after school?" Someone was asking me to hang out? Goodness... "I'd like that," I said, smiling. I really would. ...