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Re: Seven Deadly Sins
PRIDE
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Wars
This is for the 'Extra Read All About It' contest. I know this might seem lame, but wait until the ending to judge. It has a surprise ending. Wolf Wars. ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Death Song
Hey Conrad! You always give excellent reviews, and I saw you didn't have any, so here I am! I really liked this. When I read the first paragraph, I didn't ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: So Seductive
This was different, in a good way. I like how you weren't afraid to branch out and go beyond what other's post on here. And best of all, you didn't ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Hands
Hey there! Classy here for a review! “And he felt the baby bump. He knows you’re pregnant. He thinks it’s his, and he’s pissed off that you didn’t tell him. ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Elemental Thirteen Prologue (Rewritten)
'Ello Forest! slim, curvy I don't think you can be both. I really think it's one or the other. You could say that she has curves, because that would imply ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Hope
Classy here, time for a review. I don't say this often, but this really was amazing. :) Plot I think this would be better as a second chapter. Here you ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: It Has To Be....
I kind of agree with perdido. This poem makes me pity the writer. Why is her voice and tone like this? Is this your voice, or a character's voice? What ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Nature
Hey there! Not sure how to review Photography, but I'll just leave you with my opinions. :) 1. All of these are very sad, but this is the saddest of ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Pirates of the Caribbean: The Waves of Jaws
Haha, "we're gonna need a bigger boat." Classic... So, I liked this. The dialogue felt real. I felt like I was actually listening to Jack and Will speak, and I ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Dragon Riders
Can we make up our own power? I want mine to have the power of 'pain.'
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: I little snippet of my story
Hey there! Classy here for a review. :) The rains had come early to the arid eastern provinces four months out of every twelvemonth the rains poured down in stinging ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: With you
Hey! Classy here for a review. So I would just like to point this out to you: With you I want to touch the world Our hands outstretched, gently And ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: Computer Generated Imagery DT
Woo! I love you AAAM!
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The Obscured (Scene 1)
Hey! Classy here for a review! I really liked it. I agree with the above. This moves at a great pace. I can see a story unfolding. Are you having ...
Apr 3, 2010
