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  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Called To War: P.F.C Joseph Allen

    Hi there! So, I read the comment about this being about the first mission in Call of Duty, and then I googled it and you seemed to have used the ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Hellbreaker

    Hi there! This is cool, and seems like you were writing your thoughts directly down on paper, which is why it flowed so well. It's also the reason why this ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Reflection

    Hi there! Aww this is so darn cute! I really like this idea of the reflection. I think the only negative thing I have to say about it is that ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Golden Lights, it's a Terrible Shame

    Hey there! Woah this was really good. I really like how the beginning about the expectations. What I like best about it is how you don't directly go out and ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: My Deepest Apologies

    It's alright Nate. We don't hate you for giving us a junk email to put with the other 100 junk emails we get a day.

    May 27, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Lies That Kill

    Hi there! This was good. It contained interesting things that caught my attention from the start, and kept it right until the bar scene. I think this is because you ...

    May 17, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    ^ I have that on IE when I use it at the school computers. Chrome is fine.

    May 15, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Bloodlust

    Hi there! Yeah for a vampire story (I'm not a big fan of them. Like the rest of the world, Twilight ruined if for me. xD) this is really good! ...

    May 14, 2011
  • Archive Re: Onward to Freedom

    Kei There are Wyng'tii here, there are Wyng'tii here , Kei thought to himself continuously, eying both of them. One was awkwardly stretched on someone's shoulders, the other drifting about. ...

    May 12, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Down To hell

    Hi there! Yes, you should definitely continue this. However, if/when you do, you need to change it. I love the first half - it gives great insight to the character ...

    May 12, 2011
  • Archive Re: Onward to Freedom

    Name: Kei Ta'Look (pronounce 'key') Age: 25 Gender: Male Race: Elf Appearance: Basically the following picture, except he has bright blue eyes. He's strong but not extremely buff, effortless-ish looki

    May 10, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Nintendo 3DS

    Eh, I hear there are some bugs. Like you have to hold the DS at the perfect length away from you for it to work. But I may just be ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Need You Now

    Hi there! Aww this is great. I can completely relate to this, and I bet a lot of people can. Until you meet a person that you can see yourself ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Zombification

    Hi there! Oh, this is so cute! I love every bit of it, from the puns to the heartwarming ending. And the way you describe zombies, sure, I'd probably feel ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Snoink

    SNOINK IS MY FAVORITE.

    May 6, 2011


sometimes i don't consider myself a poet but then i remember that i literally write poetry
— chikara