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Re: Called To War: P.F.C Joseph Allen
Hi there! So, I read the comment about this being about the first mission in Call of Duty, and then I googled it and you seemed to have used the ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Hellbreaker
Hi there! This is cool, and seems like you were writing your thoughts directly down on paper, which is why it flowed so well. It's also the reason why this ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Reflection
Hi there! Aww this is so darn cute! I really like this idea of the reflection. I think the only negative thing I have to say about it is that ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Golden Lights, it's a Terrible Shame
Hey there! Woah this was really good. I really like how the beginning about the expectations. What I like best about it is how you don't directly go out and ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: My Deepest Apologies
It's alright Nate. We don't hate you for giving us a junk email to put with the other 100 junk emails we get a day.
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Lies That Kill
Hi there! This was good. It contained interesting things that caught my attention from the start, and kept it right until the bar scene. I think this is because you ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
^ I have that on IE when I use it at the school computers. Chrome is fine.
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Bloodlust
Hi there! Yeah for a vampire story (I'm not a big fan of them. Like the rest of the world, Twilight ruined if for me. xD) this is really good! ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Onward to Freedom
Kei There are Wyng'tii here, there are Wyng'tii here , Kei thought to himself continuously, eying both of them. One was awkwardly stretched on someone's shoulders, the other drifting about. ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Down To hell
Hi there! Yes, you should definitely continue this. However, if/when you do, you need to change it. I love the first half - it gives great insight to the character ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Onward to Freedom
Name: Kei Ta'Look (pronounce 'key') Age: 25 Gender: Male Race: Elf Appearance: Basically the following picture, except he has bright blue eyes. He's strong but not extremely buff, effortless-ish looki
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Nintendo 3DS
Eh, I hear there are some bugs. Like you have to hold the DS at the perfect length away from you for it to work. But I may just be ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Need You Now
Hi there! Aww this is great. I can completely relate to this, and I bet a lot of people can. Until you meet a person that you can see yourself ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Zombification
Hi there! Oh, this is so cute! I love every bit of it, from the puns to the heartwarming ending. And the way you describe zombies, sure, I'd probably feel ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Snoink
SNOINK IS MY FAVORITE.
May 6, 2011
