captain.classy

This is the funniest boring video ever. I'm so excited for this!

Thanks Mo.!

Hello! Classy here, welcome to YWS! I must say that I have no trouble with your rhymes. I actually thought the poem flowed and rhymed beautifully! This really was such ...

Hai! Classy here! So, the first thing I thought when I read this was commas, commas, commas. Punctuation is better than no punctuation, but more-than-necessary punctuation is worse than no ...

Hey El! So, this piece has some great lines in it, but it doesn't seem complete, which can be a problem. I think the part you're missing is the answer ...

Ever have a great idea and you just can't start it? Then you get frustrated and start from the middle, even though you know that it's not going to turn ...

Hi there! Classy here for a review. Realistic-ness So, this story isn't very realistic. I like the plot, but there are some things that just don't make sense. He should ...

Name: Lily (aka Lil) Baker Age: 22 Personality: As you can see she's still a bit young an undecided. She likes to listen to what other people say, and is ...

[Miss Ruby Kip] I was walking down the hall when someone snuck up from behind me. I twirled around, only to see the beautiful Brair standing behind me. "Oh, hey." ...

Your writing is not boring at all. In fact, I was extremely entertained while reading this. My favorite part was that at the end, I wasn't expecting more. It finished. ...

I like the new emphasis on short stories. It might help with the issue of them dying. It's a bit confusing, but I'll get used to it.

Jabs!

So, does anyone want to be paired specifically with anyone? Look at the current pairs and tell me if you don't like them. :P And yes, Wildest Temptations , if ...

[Kei] This is going to be a little long. Plot change!! "You... you don't love me?" "I'm sorry Kei... I just don't think we will work out..." He turned and ...

Let me start off by saying that you're a wonderful writer. I was very delighted while reading this. It had superb grammar, and barely any misspellings. Plus every sentence flowed, ...