captain.classy

As a fashion designer myself, I was very drawn to this post. ^^ let's get started here... 1. So, how can I put this... costume. It looks like the costume ...

:D Ellie! I'm so proud of you! xD Not even a year on YWS, yet ;___; *sniffles* xD But seriously, YWS is life-changing. Also, these tips are great :D ... ...

First time experimenting with charcoal... I like it, haha. Enjoy, Sam Charcoal1.jpg I don't know about this one... I like it but the eyes are too big and the nose ...

cres1.jpg picture 1 and 2 Red : Her nose is practically nonexistent. There needs to be a fine line, a distinct line, between the nose and the lip. If you ...

I like this. The only negative thing I have to comment on is the shading. Being an artist myself, I spend a lot of time focusing on the shading. Here, ...

This is very cute. I liked the lines and how smoothly your sentences formed... after the first two paragraphs. Read the first two paragraphs aloud. Do you see how choppy ...

[Rose] "Do you forgive me?" James said. His smile was kind of awkward, but cute. "Of course silly!" I whipped around and things happened all at once. Luke was yelling ...

:D I loved doing this. We need another project El, haha.

[Rose] It was the end of training and Rose suggested they all head to the beach. It was still early in the day, and she wanted to party with her ...

There's also this group that should explain how to format, how to kick-off your screenplay, things like that. ;)

[Rose] After introductions, Sandy announced that it was time for lunch break. Luke had suggested ice cream, and the closest was a few miles away at a shopping center. We ...

RedSun, just act as if the ball has been passed to you! And interact with your character! If you don't feel 'in' after that, say so and I will include ...

I'm offended I wasn't mentioned. Haha just kiddin'! This was adorable. Now I feel like writing my own. But of course I won't! Classy people don't copy. :P

This was interesting. I really did want to read more, and that's a great thing. Now onto the review. Characters Chloe - She's very 'flat;' she isn't 'round.' This means ...

*saves spot for epic review to remind herself that she needs to do an epic review* On to math homework!